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On the day when mountains fall
The sea turns red and Angels call
I’ll hear your name and run your way
To see you through that final day
I’ll pass through fire, earth and air
If only just to show I care
I’d take your hand and shield you from
All the terrors yet to come
The sand will scream, the stars will cry
The dead will rise and life will die
The gates of hell will open wide
And all the world will run and hide
The moon will crack, the sun will burn
And then it will become our turn
One by one, crime by crime
They’ll all be asked about their time
Most will beg and scream, “FORGIVE!”
But that is how they chose to live
Some will smile, turn and say
“We’ve waited for this final day”
Then off to heaven, they will go
Where streams of rum and honey flow
And still I stand, right by your side
Watching, waiting, mystified
Heavens lights are bright, it’s true
But I’d rather stay and wait with you
Wait until we BOTH could walk
To heaven’s gates and break the lock
We’d stroll right through, hand in hand
And look upon the shining sand
But sadly, bliss, I did not feel
For what I said, it was not real
Heaven never let me in
Because breaking your heart was my biggest sin
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:iconzer0barrier:
Perfect.
mashalla.
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:iconblood-and-lust-87:
~BLOOD-and-LUST-87 Jun 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, that was gorgeous! Lovely! <3 We miss you over on JokerRachelFans! :O
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I love it!!
but when I read the ending i was like :|
it was shocking
I love the words!
it's amazing I wouldn’t want you to change a thing in it :)
You have a gift...<3
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I wrote this loooonnnggggg thing and all what you say is tyhanks =_=
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:icondabungun:
LOL!! what else do you want me to say?!

"oh THANK you shegaf from the bottom of my bright red heart!!! I CHERISH THY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT!!!! HAZZZAH!!"


-_-
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:icons-r-r:
AHAHHA!!!!!
Yea yes I know =D
I know I touched your heart :P
AAAAAA333333
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:icondabungun:
>_< you = weird
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:iconsensenman:
it's great...sad...and sometimes this is real...there really are such persons...anyway...i liked it:)
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